Was I...???

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His breath blew away the hair on my face,
I stared in surprise, scared, calm....but felt my heart race...
My hand in air.... confused… as I didn’t want to hold him,
He came even more close to kiss…A sin!

My eyes closed…scared and bewildered,
But he very well monitored…
A tear rolled down my cheek,
I couldn’t.... But my eyes did speak....

Felt the breeze on my face,
As also his hand went through my shirt in slow pace....
I shivered, but wasn’t cold,
His hunger grew, for me to hold…

My stomach twitched,
As his hand lingered....
The shiver grew,
As I gave up and surrendered....

The shirts came apart, as he threw them over the sack,
He struggled further on my back...
The restless hand unhooked the last piece
As he picked me up to take me under the sheets...

That tongue licked everywhere,
Tasting my every drop of sweat...
I gazed in pain and despair,
As his throne moved inside, defining a ruthless death...

With time I saw the feelings end,
The touch tearing me apart, I hate his scent...
Forgotten what innocence meant,
Now get a feeling... I was a rent…!!!

Comments

  1. Divya RanadiveFebruary 26, 2011 at 3:58 AM

    a very old poem.. thought of posting it now :)

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  2. JingleMarch 2, 2011 at 10:24 AM

    powerful..
    Happy Rally.

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  3. Divya RanadiveMarch 2, 2011 at 10:32 AM

    :) thanks dear

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  4. The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side)March 2, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    Oh gosh.. this is deep and certainly overwhelming.. Rich in emotions too.. from one feeling to another..

    You bring out all so perfectly... Great write..

    Oh yes, by the way, here is mine.. Hope to see you around.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html

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  5. AnonymousMarch 2, 2011 at 11:34 AM

    it made my heart race so fast... love how smoothly you presented the change in emotions. amazing!

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  6. UnknownMarch 2, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    A sad tale of the loss of innocence

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  7. AnonymousMarch 2, 2011 at 9:51 PM

    This is fierce...Wow.

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  8. AnonymousMarch 3, 2011 at 4:57 AM

    erotic rally! my wk 39 is here.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/

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  9. AnonymousMarch 3, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    A nice narrative, I could see a whole chapter coming out and then a book from this, nice work! Happy rally!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/03/04/x-chasing/

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  10. AnonymousMarch 3, 2011 at 4:51 PM

    Innocence and modesty lost in wonder! Well put!
    http://vishwasanand28.wordpress.com/

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  11. Divya RanadiveMarch 4, 2011 at 6:23 AM

    thanks you all... thanks a ton.. happy rally to u all too :)..

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  12. ashuMarch 5, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    Really loved the flow... An emotion well narrated... Keep it up Div

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  13. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 4:04 AM

    I really loved this poem.. it is one of a kind and the idea is genius

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  14. Raghavendra MuttMarch 24, 2011 at 2:39 PM

    Nice one.. U described it so well, especially th end.. loved it.. Keep writing..

    p.s: u gained a new follower..

    - Raghu
    http://reflections-shatteredmirror.blogspot.com

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  15. Divya RanadiveMarch 26, 2011 at 11:17 AM

    Thanks a lot :)

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